Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, September 2, 2019
plastic in the ocean
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Grace! I think people will buy metal straws if they see you blog post! It is amazing, all of the detail and good words you did an awesome job. It was really cool how you put the price in and all of the cool backgrounds.Maybe next time you should try using different punctuation. How long did this take you to make?
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