Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, October 29, 2019
Swimming at QEll
We did swimming for the whole week.
Have you ever been to QEll
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Hi Grace i'm kyro from Marshland School you are a graet swimmer and maby you could show yourself in the photos but great job.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Grace
ReplyDeleteLiked how you changed the font. Maybe next time you could put a question mark at the end of you question, Have you ever been to QEll. Well yes I have been 20 times! Could you please check out my blog http://marzarad.blogspot.com
Zara
Hi Grace,
ReplyDeleteIt's Zoe W from Marshland School!
I really liked your post because it is something different from most posts because most posts are about school work when this is different and more fun!
I could relate to you because last year when my class when to QEII we did the same things as you did on that Wednesday like the falling backwards off the boat and huddling.
Next time you could describe how you felt, what you heard, what you could feel, and what you tasted
Altogether I thought it was a really good post, Good Job!